posted by [identity profile] cupnjava.livejournal.com at 10:19am on 12/08/2007
You have some typos, but this is good, dear. REAL good. It GRABBED me from go! I could almost pick the rythym of music in the pace and flow of your words. And it was hot! One of the hotter handjobs I've read and handjobs are hard to make hot.

*applause* Good stuff!

Sync not singe.

http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/sync
http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/singe

I included the links because I wasn't sure if that was a typo or misunderstanding the definitions.

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