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posted by [personal profile] ginnyvos at 07:23pm on 07/04/2007 under
Random Note: An imagination is like a pair of wings;  It can get you anywhere but if it breaks you crash down, yet reality can be a whole lot harder than the ground.

Hmmm I guess 50 is as good a number to start with as any don't you think? I'm not going to keep to the order of the list anyway.
So, a poem, to start with. Inspired by Petra Berger music. She is amazing, I swear, though her music can have a very depressive effect if listened to non-stop. Am having a headache and am tired due to lack of sleep and exame-stress, thus the kinda depressed poem.

50 ghost,  Word by Marianne ([personal profile] ulvarmarsonUlvar)

~*~


Lies

Shadow touches, shadow whispers,

Too light to be real,

Shadow lips and shadow fingers,

Can not trust the things I feel.

 

Can not believe the things I’m hearing,

Whispered in a familiar voice,

Can not trust the things I’m thinking,

Though there never really was a choice.

 

Shadow lips are pressed on mine,

All I do is close my eyes,

Because when I feel those shadow lips,

I can almost believe my lies.

 

Shadow touches, shadow whispers,

Too light to be real,

Shadow lips and shadow fingers,

Can not trust the things I feel.

 

I can almost believe you never left me,

Can almost believe you are still here,

Can almost see you with closed eyes,

You, ghost of the one I held so dear.

 

And I wish I was better at telling lies.


~*~

Let me know what you think of it?
Music:: Petra Berger
location: Desk
Mood:: 'tired' tired
There are 10 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] ulvarmarson.livejournal.com at 09:23pm on 07/04/2007
Nice nice! You rock at rhyming loved one!
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 09:35pm on 07/04/2007
haha thanks ^^ I take less than 15 minutes to write stuff like this actually ^^;;;
 
posted by [identity profile] befanini.livejournal.com at 02:20pm on 08/04/2007
Very nice! Very lyrical, lovely rhythm and imagery that the words evoke. *claps enthusiastically*
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 03:48pm on 08/04/2007
*smiles happily at the applause* Glad you like it :) Do you write poetry, btw?
I've been thinking, it might be cool to write an AU saiyuki fic right? When we finally do get around to RPing ;)
And Happy easter!
 
posted by [identity profile] befanini.livejournal.com at 03:55pm on 08/04/2007
You're welcome!

The whole part two of my "Longing" trilogy is all poems. ^_-

HAPPY EASTER TOO!!! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 04:35pm on 08/04/2007
Oh right... Kinda forgot that I guess... I never reread it... One time of going halfway into a depression was anough really... (Seriously, I cried my eyes out on that one and was still halfway depressed several days later :S)
 
posted by [identity profile] befanini.livejournal.com at 04:44pm on 08/04/2007
...You're not the only who feels that way... ^.^' Although most people love the story, they can only read it once, and never again - they say it's too close to reality and that's what makes it so painful.

But it's a happy ending! Well, sort of... <.<;
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 09:07pm on 08/04/2007
Yes I know... And that really did help, but still... It's such a haunted story and I get way too involved with the characters... While I barely ever cry irl, stories can do that, really... *shrugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] h-johanna.livejournal.com at 07:10pm on 08/04/2007
It's gorgeous, it creates a very realistic haunted feeling, something recalling familiar feelings, beautiful, a wonderful start
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 09:08pm on 08/04/2007
Thanks sweety, you put in words perfectly what I wanted to say trough the poem... Glad it ame trough :)

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