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posted by [identity profile] laeta.livejournal.com at 07:27pm on 19/10/2007
Nice to see some KouDoku luvving :DD And seeing in through Yaone's eyes was making it even more hot ;-)

Some typos:
You use 'than' instead of 'then' a few times.
'Suiting' should be 'soothing' I'm guessing :D
Kou was watching trough half-lidded eyes, 'trough' should be 'through'.
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