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posted by [personal profile] ginnyvos at 12:21pm on 19/10/2007 under ,
Random Note: I need more Pratchett books

~Watching~

By [personal profile] ginnyvos
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Yaone stumbles in on something she'd never thought to see, let be enjoy.
Prompt: Doku/Kou, somebody spying on them.
Warnings: M/M, voyeurism
Disclaimer: I don't own them, not at all... I just borrow and play with them!
A/N: I originally wrote this for the kink-meme but since people started revealing themselves, I thought I would, too. I hope you guys like! Also, I'm dieing to know who requested this!

~*~

She hadn't meant to walk in on them, really, she hadn't. She'd simply wandered into Dokugakuji's quarters because that was what she always did when he didn't reply to her knocks. She simply assumed that he was napping... So she went into his bedroom.
Doku was on his bed, sure, but he wasn't alone. Nor was he napping. 

Kougaji was on his back, head thrown back and long red hair fanning out over the pillow. He was panting and his claws had lashed into the sheets in such a manner that they had to leave holes. Doku was looming over him, sitting between his spread tights and stroking his jaw in what seemed to be a suiting rather than an arousing manner. Both of them where completely naked.
"Shhhh..." he whispered, "Easy Kou, easy..."
Kougaji groaned, eyes slowly opening to look into his lover's face. "Doku-" he began, but he couldn't seem to find the words to finish his sentence, "Doku..."
"It's alright Kou, don’t want this to end just yet, now do we?" the bigger man said, still in that soothing tone of voice.
"Doku, please..." 

She couldn't help but look, the two on the bed hadn't seen her, and they looked so- so beautiful together, so right. Something in her felt a little left out, but she refused to give in to it, refused to let it get to her. Instead, she pulled back, just a little, just beyond the door, closing it until she could only just see the two man on the bed.

"Doku, please!"
Kougaji's voice was cracking, he seemed desperate, laying there, begging for his best friend and first in command to take him. Kou had the fingers of one hand buried between Kou’s spread legs and was moving them in what seemed to be a mocking of the actual act. She slid down to her knees without a thought on her part, still mesmerized by what was going on in front of her.
A low chuckle, sounding utterly sexy, came from the Doku, and than he nodded, as if taking a decision. He let his hand fall away from Kou’s face and instead closed the distance between them, kissing the smaller man passionately, hands stroking all over his naked chest, pinching a nipple and scratching lightly over his side. Kougaji's hands came up to claw at Doku's back, to pull him closer.
Suddenly, Kou gasped and broke the kiss, making a sound that held the middle between a whine and moan. Immediately, Doku pulled back, looking down on the other with what seemed like worry on his face. "You OK?" he asked.
Kou nodded, "Just surprised me, 's all... Go on, Doku, I was ready five minutes ago!”
Grinning and shaking his head slightly, Doku pulled back his fingers from between Kou’s cheeks and started feeling around the sheets for something.

Unconsciously, one of her hands had started fondling her breast, and the other wanted to creep inside her clothing. She quickly pulled them back. She shouldn't be doing this! Shouldn't be watching them in such an intimate moment, but... But. They looked so hot, so gorgeous together and she couldn't help but watch and she was wet down there and she needed, just had to touch...

Doku had apparently found what he was looking for and was fussing with some small tube. Lube, she suddenly realized, if they where going to- to- to indulge themselves, they'd need lube. She'd heard someone say that sometime, wasn't quite sure who it was.
Doku was putting the stuff from the tube on his member - and quite enjoying it, too, by the look of it - and Kou was watching trough half-lidded eyes, legs hitched up and twitching ever so slightly. He was completely spread open for his first-in-command, his body begging for Doku to hurry up and do something.

She finally let herself go, let her hand slip into her pants and slide inside herself. She was really wet, wetter than she could remember being for a long, long time. Slowly, she started to stroke herself, shallow strokes, not really going in just yet, just teasing.

Inside the room, Doku was done with what he'd been doing and he bowed down once more to kiss Kou. The man made an impatient noise in the back of his throat but kissed back eagerly anyway, his eyes falling closed once more.
Than, Doku pulled away and started positioning himself. He was quite big, she absently noted, and Kou had to think so too because he flinched when Doku started to push in. Doku immediately held still, waiting for Kou to adjust, no doubt, but when Kou gave an impatient noise he started pushing in again.


Now, she allowed her own fingers to go deeper, sliding in easily, much easier than Doku’s member inside Kou and oh god that felt good…
Doku stopped, fully inside now, and held still, the expression on his face clearly stating the love, the devotion he felt for the man under him and once more she felt like an intruder, but than Kou moaned and pulled Doku down and Doku started moving and the feeling slid away because they looked so hot and her fingers felt so good…
She pinched her nipple, rolling her breast under her hand, squeezing it while starting to slowly move the finger inside her in and out, rubbing her hand over her clit because that made it that much better…

Kou was moaning now, not even trying to hold in the sounds anymore and that was good because neither could she and that way they wouldn’t hear… She was breathing hard now, panting almost, and she could see Doku speeding up his thrusts and she slid a second and than a third finger inside herself, thrusting them in more forcefully, mimicking her friends inside the room.

Doku bowed down and kissed Kou, taking away his moans, but she was too far gone to muffle her own and they seemed too caught up in each other to notice anyway. She was leaning against the wall, eyes still glued to the two on the bed and she was almost there, almost, and it seemed like the other two wouldn’t last long either.
Suddenly, Kou arched his back, pressing even closer to Doku, pushing him even deeper inside himself, his breath audibly stuttering out of him as he came.

She didn’t even see it when Doku came, only heard him as he called out Kou’s name, because she’d closed her eyes and she arched her own back, pressing her fingers inside herself one last time, deeper than she’d done before.
Her vision whited out but she didn’t make a sound. For a moment she was still like that, all her muscles tense, eyes closed tightly but with the visual of Doku fucking Kou burned onto her eyelids anyway and at that moment she was completely oblivious to anything. Than, after what seemed like eternity but couldn’t have been more than a few seconds, her whole body relaxed completely, her bones seemingly melting into nothingness.
When she felt up to opening her eyes again, the first thing she saw where the two man at the bed. They seemed to be in a similar state, Doku lying half on top of Kou, arms wrapped around him. Kou was murmuring something so softly that she didn’t quite catch it, but when Doku shook his head slightly Kou relaxed back into the bed, seemingly content to not say anything.

Slowly, she got up, fighting her protesting body all the way and finally winning with the promise of sitting down once she got out of here, when suddenly, realisation slammed into her and she felt herself stumble under the pressure of it.
She’d watched her lord and her best friend fucking each other. Not only that, but she’d gotten off on it, too. Oh god. Oh dear god, what had she done…?

~*~

“Yaone, there you are, I was looking for you…”

“Ah- Ehmn, Dokugakuji, I-“ What should she say? He would know what she did! But, he couldn’t know, right? He couldn’t know that she watched him and their lord have sex? There was no way! Please don’t let him know…

Doku smiled as he looked down on her. “Yes…?” he asked, grin broadening at her fidgeting.

“I- Well, that is- Eh…”

“You know, next time you want to watch, you could just ask… We might even let you join in,”.

She stared at him, dumbfounded. He knew. He knew! But he didn’t seem angry, not at all, he seemed… He seemed almost eager! How- What-

Slowly, as if giving her the chance to pull away, he brought up his hand, caressing the side of her face and than cupping her jaw. She was too stunned to pull away though and that was the only reason that she allowed him to kiss her. Nothing much, just a soft press of lips on hers before he pulled away.

“I talked it over with Kou and he said he didn’t really mind either…” Doku shrugged, looking a little less certain now.

“He- You-“ she didn’t get it, couldn’t find anything to say, couldn’t make her mind form any other words than… “You knew..? Kou knew?” Panic was rising fast now and she wanted to flee, only he was still cupping her jaw and-

“I saw you… It was kinda hot to be honest, you watching us. You where pretty hot yourself, there out in the hallway. Didn’t think Kou noticed though… So, do you want to? Join us, I mean? I wouldn’t mind and Kou wouldn’t, so…”

Her head started nodding. That wasn’t her doing, it was her head moving all on its own without her consent but when she saw a grin coming up on his face, the sexiest grin she’d ever seen, she couldn’t bring herself to care and when he kissed her again, she opened her mouth, inviting him in.

~*~

Review, pwetty pwetty please?
Mood:: 'dorky' dorky
location: University library Utrecht
There are 17 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
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posted by [personal profile] scribblemoose at 12:47pm on 19/10/2007
That was incredibly hot. Very, very hot. Nicely done. ^^
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 08:02pm on 19/10/2007
*has a silly, silly big grin on her face* I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't all that sure of the flow if it, specially in the beginning of the fic... Thank you for reading and liking it!
 
posted by [identity profile] gen50.livejournal.com at 01:21pm on 19/10/2007
prachett books. you and my friend have the exact same want.

ahem. nicely done. i like dou and kou because i think it is canon (i know, but how come dou gets to call kou, kou - his liege lord, if they werent intimate).

i should think both kou and dou should have known about yaone... superior demon senses (canon, right?) so they would have smelt yaone.

but that aside - i dont do concrit very well.
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 08:08pm on 19/10/2007
Hmmm and you don't want Prachett books? You must've not read any yet ;)

Hihi I can't help but agree with you in saying it's as good as common. I really like them too, as a couple though I feel sorry for Yaone being left out of the loop (than again, this way she did join in a bit! And next time will be even better for her! :D

Hmmm I think they where rather... Cought up in what they where doing. Doku was still kind of alert to his suroundings beause hey, that's his job, but Kou was already being teased silly by the time Yaone arived and her smell/chi/feel/whatever is so familiar that it would be easy to overlook when... Distracted.
 
posted by [identity profile] befanini.livejournal.com at 04:37pm on 19/10/2007
*e-hem!*
Hehehe
Never let it be said that all the "talents" were taken up by just one brother. XD
Good job! ^_-
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 08:11pm on 19/10/2007
Hey, the guys are brothers they should have something in common right? Besides, Doku never did stuck me as the type to get all uptight about things like that. I've always felt that his attitude about sex and stuff would be something like 'Well, when it feels good to everyone involved and noone is hurt by it, why not?' I mean, he's pretty easygoing all round...
 
posted by [identity profile] laeta.livejournal.com at 07:27pm on 19/10/2007
Nice to see some KouDoku luvving :DD And seeing in through Yaone's eyes was making it even more hot ;-)

Some typos:
You use 'than' instead of 'then' a few times.
'Suiting' should be 'soothing' I'm guessing :D
Kou was watching trough half-lidded eyes, 'trough' should be 'through'.
 
posted by [identity profile] lillypuff.livejournal.com at 09:31pm on 19/10/2007
I believe I let it be know that I liked this on the meme, so now I'm glad to see who wrote it :D You did a great job!
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 04:50pm on 23/10/2007
Thank you! It makes me happy to know someone read and liked it on the meme! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] sherrys1977.livejournal.com at 03:07am on 20/10/2007
loved it!!!
very hot but i agree they both should have noticed her.
can't wait on the next one
hope its one with the 3 of them together
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 04:46pm on 23/10/2007
Haha it's gonna be hard to write though... Very much so!
 
posted by [identity profile] turquoise-woman.livejournal.com at 06:50am on 20/10/2007
Totally HOT. Well-done.
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 04:35pm on 23/10/2007
Thank you! :D ^-^
 
posted by [identity profile] thefacelessevil.livejournal.com at 06:13pm on 23/10/2007
HAVE HER JOIN HAVE HER JOIN HAVE HER JOIN >:D

oops, i mean... haha, thanks for postin this~~~~
 
posted by [identity profile] purpleicicles.livejournal.com at 09:55pm on 25/10/2007
Seconded! That was waaaaayyy hotter than it should have been ;D
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:25pm on 30/10/2007
*laughs* And why shouldn't it be hot? 'Cause she's a girl? But girls can be friggin hot too you know? ;) (And honestly? They're way easier to write.... For me at least.
 
posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:23pm on 30/10/2007
*laughs* I intend to! Though honestly I'm barely comfortable writing normal sex-scenes and have read very little het... So it's gonna be a bitch to write. But hey, I can try and see what comes of it right?

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