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Saiyuki Haiku

posted by [personal profile] ginnyvos at 11:56pm on 26/06/2008 under ,
Random Note: In 39 hours I get to see my mom for the first time in 5 months! :D

So... [profile] saiyuki_time's challenge this week is haiku's... A challenge right up my alley! (for those who remember, I also once wrote a oneshot which had Goku writing haiku).
Without further ado, here are the first three! (who knows, maybe there'll be more!)



Gold hears from closed doors,
Sounds of passion ill concealed,
Wonders, why not me?



Purple heard his voice,
When gold called out desperately,
“Shut up and be free.”



Voices from his past
Haunt him still, the red haired child,
In green's arms they mute
location: Oslo still
Mood:: 'contemplative' contemplative
Music:: Mary Poppins - Stay awake
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posted by [identity profile] h-johanna.livejournal.com at 10:11pm on 26/06/2008
I must honestly say I don't understand them all, hehe, but I like the imagery
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:19pm on 26/06/2008
They're about the Saiyuki boys, Goku is gold, Sanzo purple, Gojyo red and Hakkai green. Does that help?
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posted by [identity profile] lauand.livejournal.com at 10:44pm on 26/06/2008
Nice. I'm not much into haikus, and I don't think I'll take this challenge, but I would say you did it very well.
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:46pm on 26/06/2008
Heh glad you like them! ^^ I like haiku's and such... It's quite a challenge to say what you want to say in so few words.It's a very interesting form of poetry.
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posted by [identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com at 10:13am on 27/06/2008
The imagery is lovely for each one but I love the last the best!

You enjoy yourself with your mother ok! *Hugs*
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 11:06am on 27/06/2008
I'm rather fond of the last one as well, to be honest, so I'm glad you like it! ^^
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posted by [identity profile] purpleicicles.livejournal.com at 12:55pm on 27/06/2008
I love all of these! The hurt feeling of the first one is a serious *ouch* moment, the second is almost desperate sounding but with a nice tome of altruism, and the last is just lovely!
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posted by [identity profile] befanini.livejournal.com at 01:05pm on 27/06/2008
Nicely done, Ginny-Anne! ♥
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 09:15pm on 27/06/2008
Thank you! ^^
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posted by [identity profile] winged-sandals.livejournal.com at 08:23pm on 27/06/2008
Nice job. I especially liked the first one.
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:10pm on 27/06/2008
Yes... Poor Goku. One has to wonder who are there behind closed doors... What exactly his jealousy is.
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posted by [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com at 08:36pm on 27/06/2008
oh nice. i especially love Gojyo's
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:11pm on 27/06/2008
Thank you,glad you like it. That one was the hardest, I have to say.
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posted by [identity profile] liralen.livejournal.com at 10:51pm on 27/06/2008
Very nice... :-)

And cool about your mom!!
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posted by [identity profile] mr-redrum.livejournal.com at 06:27pm on 11/07/2008
...beautiful...and I even not following genshou maiden saiyuki...but this just beautiful...mine is nothing compare with this...it's a cool stuffs that you able to write haiku...
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posted by [identity profile] ginnyvos.livejournal.com at 10:05am on 12/07/2008
Thank you so much :) I have to admit poetry is kind of my talent... More so that writing really. It doesn't happen often enough though ^^;;

You wrote some yourself? Do you have a link for me? I'd love to read!
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posted by [identity profile] mr-redrum.livejournal.com at 11:30pm on 12/07/2008
...sorry just have the time to reply.well,you did looks like have that talent...mine is not so good...I'll give you the link,it's at my journal,under the "my personal lyricalpoems" tags.or at fictionpress.com...

but remember,I already give you a warning that they're not as good as you...like I said before,I can't even write haiku...anyway,I'll wait for your next haiku ^_^...

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