Saiyuki Haiku

[ginnyvos]

Random Note: In 39 hours I get to see my mom for the first time in 5 months! :D

So... saiyuki_time's challenge this week is haiku's... A challenge right up my alley! (for those who remember, I also once wrote a oneshot which had Goku writing haiku).
Without further ado, here are the first three! (who knows, maybe there'll be more!)



Gold hears from closed doors,
Sounds of passion ill concealed,
Wonders, why not me?



Purple heard his voice,
When gold called out desperately,
“Shut up and be free.”



Voices from his past
Haunt him still, the red haired child,
In green's arms they mute

Comments

[h-johanna.livejournal.com]

I must honestly say I don't understand them all, hehe, but I like the imagery

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

They're about the Saiyuki boys, Goku is gold, Sanzo purple, Gojyo red and Hakkai green. Does that help?

[lauand.livejournal.com]

Nice. I'm not much into haikus, and I don't think I'll take this challenge, but I would say you did it very well.

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Heh glad you like them! ^^ I like haiku's and such... It's quite a challenge to say what you want to say in so few words.It's a very interesting form of poetry.

[i-am-zan.livejournal.com]

The imagery is lovely for each one but I love the last the best!

You enjoy yourself with your mother ok! *Hugs*

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

I'm rather fond of the last one as well, to be honest, so I'm glad you like it! ^^

[purpleicicles.livejournal.com]

I love all of these! The hurt feeling of the first one is a serious *ouch* moment, the second is almost desperate sounding but with a nice tome of altruism, and the last is just lovely!

[befanini.livejournal.com]

Nicely done, Ginny-Anne! ♥

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ^^

[winged-sandals.livejournal.com]

Nice job. I especially liked the first one.

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Yes... Poor Goku. One has to wonder who are there behind closed doors... What exactly his jealousy is.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

oh nice. i especially love Gojyo's

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Thank you,glad you like it. That one was the hardest, I have to say.

[liralen.livejournal.com]

Very nice... :-)

And cool about your mom!!

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...beautiful...and I even not following genshou maiden saiyuki...but this just beautiful...mine is nothing compare with this...it's a cool stuffs that you able to write haiku...

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :) I have to admit poetry is kind of my talent... More so that writing really. It doesn't happen often enough though ^^;;

You wrote some yourself? Do you have a link for me? I'd love to read!

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...sorry just have the time to reply.well,you did looks like have that talent...mine is not so good...I'll give you the link,it's at my journal,under the "my personal lyricalpoems" tags.or at fictionpress.com...

but remember,I already give you a warning that they're not as good as you...like I said before,I can't even write haiku...anyway,I'll wait for your next haiku ^_^...