Saiyuki Haiku

[ginnyvos]

Random Note: In 39 hours I get to see my mom for the first time in 5 months! :D

So... saiyuki_time's challenge this week is haiku's... A challenge right up my alley! (for those who remember, I also once wrote a oneshot which had Goku writing haiku).
Without further ado, here are the first three! (who knows, maybe there'll be more!)



Gold hears from closed doors,
Sounds of passion ill concealed,
Wonders, why not me?



Purple heard his voice,
When gold called out desperately,
“Shut up and be free.”



Voices from his past
Haunt him still, the red haired child,
In green's arms they mute

Comments

[h-johanna.livejournal.com]

I must honestly say I don't understand them all, hehe, but I like the imagery

[lauand.livejournal.com]

Nice. I'm not much into haikus, and I don't think I'll take this challenge, but I would say you did it very well.

[i-am-zan.livejournal.com]

The imagery is lovely for each one but I love the last the best!

You enjoy yourself with your mother ok! *Hugs*

[purpleicicles.livejournal.com]

I love all of these! The hurt feeling of the first one is a serious *ouch* moment, the second is almost desperate sounding but with a nice tome of altruism, and the last is just lovely!

[befanini.livejournal.com]

Nicely done, Ginny-Anne! ♥

[winged-sandals.livejournal.com]

Nice job. I especially liked the first one.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

oh nice. i especially love Gojyo's

[liralen.livejournal.com]

Very nice... :-)

And cool about your mom!!

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...beautiful...and I even not following genshou maiden saiyuki...but this just beautiful...mine is nothing compare with this...it's a cool stuffs that you able to write haiku...