Saiyuki Haiku

[ginnyvos]

Random Note: In 39 hours I get to see my mom for the first time in 5 months! :D

So... saiyuki_time's challenge this week is haiku's... A challenge right up my alley! (for those who remember, I also once wrote a oneshot which had Goku writing haiku).
Without further ado, here are the first three! (who knows, maybe there'll be more!)



Gold hears from closed doors,
Sounds of passion ill concealed,
Wonders, why not me?



Purple heard his voice,
When gold called out desperately,
“Shut up and be free.”



Voices from his past
Haunt him still, the red haired child,
In green's arms they mute

Comments

[lauand.livejournal.com]

Nice. I'm not much into haikus, and I don't think I'll take this challenge, but I would say you did it very well.

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Heh glad you like them! ^^ I like haiku's and such... It's quite a challenge to say what you want to say in so few words.It's a very interesting form of poetry.