Saiyuki Haiku

[ginnyvos]

Random Note: In 39 hours I get to see my mom for the first time in 5 months! :D

So... saiyuki_time's challenge this week is haiku's... A challenge right up my alley! (for those who remember, I also once wrote a oneshot which had Goku writing haiku).
Without further ado, here are the first three! (who knows, maybe there'll be more!)



Gold hears from closed doors,
Sounds of passion ill concealed,
Wonders, why not me?



Purple heard his voice,
When gold called out desperately,
“Shut up and be free.”



Voices from his past
Haunt him still, the red haired child,
In green's arms they mute

Comments

[ginnyvos.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much :) I have to admit poetry is kind of my talent... More so that writing really. It doesn't happen often enough though ^^;;

You wrote some yourself? Do you have a link for me? I'd love to read!

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...sorry just have the time to reply.well,you did looks like have that talent...mine is not so good...I'll give you the link,it's at my journal,under the "my personal lyricalpoems" tags.or at fictionpress.com...

but remember,I already give you a warning that they're not as good as you...like I said before,I can't even write haiku...anyway,I'll wait for your next haiku ^_^...